A social site for poets in Sydney.
Posted on May 16, 2012 at 0:21 1 Comment 0 Likes
i love this poem, yet i find the ending to be missing something i cannot seem to change it because is there for me. It probably needs a word change in a couple of places, but sometimes the roughness of a piece adds life to it
He died in the fall they say,
I wasn’t there to relive it,
He had died in my heart long ago,
They almost knew it
I didn’t expel my thoughts soon after
Just as he could not on his last breath,
One could…
ContinuePosted on May 16, 2011 at 15:53 2 Comments 0 Likes
well this is just something i did in about 10 minutes just now, i don't know if its any good but i like it, i thought i'd like to see what everyone else though - i have other ones that i would like to share but this i might show first just to test out the waters - just a bit of background on the piece, i'm not the most feminine of girls so i have lived with such commentary my whole life and i feel it doesn't really matter what i am
Ask me about my sexual…
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This is a social site built by the poets (and friends) of Sydney (and surrounds) for the poets (and friends) of Sydney (and surrounds).
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Good to see you getting involved with the site already. This being a social site the more we all do here the more interesting it becomes for everyone.
There's no membership fee and no middlewoman – there is though just a bit of moderation to keep it clean and on-topic.
So we all know a bit more about your interest in poetry it'd be great if you introduced yourself, what you write, what you read etc with a few words in a blog post or the editable text box on your profile page (and, if you're in the mood, add an image for your avatar).
Best wishes,
Adrian
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