Walking down the moutain

in the midday rain,

I passed a girl, moving slowly,

with sandalled feet uncertain -

taking impossible care.

Even from behind

I could see something wasn't right.

 

Self-conscious,

afraid to scare her

on such a lonely track,

I snapped a branch in warning

beneath my feet;

but she didn't turn.

 

Nearer still.

Me, deliberately puffing.

she, soundless.

The water sliding

off her grey-black hair.

 

(It's hard to fathom now

she was even there.)

 

Yet, I certainly passed her.

And as I did, nodded,

said a short hello.

Her face, I think, feigned to smile

but showed only pain.

 

I went by quickly, moved,

tried to stop myself -

unsuccessfully -

from glancing back.

 

She was staring downwards,

ghost-like,

clothes clinging

to her forlorn figure,

almost stationary.

 

Each of us

on the same path,

soaking our struggles.

 

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Hi Catherine. Thanks for commenting. Maybe you're right about different stardust and being alone, but I hope not! I've actually been trying to write some happier stuff, but it's just not coming out at the moment. Also enjoy reading your poetry. Look forward to your next one. Derek

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