Midnight at silent lake

Like razorblades
knowing the difference
Midnight by silent lake 
Flat serene only birds 
Rustling in bushes  
Two eyes in a moonlit sky
Amongst a million stars 
Life peace hope and  
My love, my honest love for you

   Copyright Ilan Cohen 2010

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Permalink Reply by Vee on September 16, 2010 at 16:14
Love it! This is really great. The form that you've chosen really works. Don't want to say too much or I'll disturb the vibe - shhhhh! V
Permalink Reply by Ilan on September 16, 2010 at 20:09
Thank you Victoria that's very good of you
to say so, I look forward to reading your poems too,

kind rgs
ilan

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