"S e c r e t/S k i n/S c r e a m/"

Does Secret Skin
mean secret things
to secret Creams
of secret Means?

Are secret Dreams
the secret thing

a Secret Skin
makes separate
screens?

Are Secret Dreams
the secret thing

a Secret Skin
makes separate
Sing?

Are Secret Screams
my Secret Dreams
the secrets screened
the ones I mean?

Are Secret Screams
my Secret Dreams
the Secret Screams
the ones I mean?

Do you hold Breath
against my neck
or does that Hate
Stink from your breath?

Do you hold death
against my neck
or does that Hate
glow from Your Breath?

Does secret skin
mean secret things
to Secret Screams
of Secret Dreams?

Are secret dreams
the secret thing

a Secret Skin
makes Secret
seem?

Are Secret Dreams
the secret thing

a secret skin
makes Secrets
Scream?

Do you give Cream
for all My Dreams?/or
Are My Screams
Your Dreamfilled Means?
Do you hold Cream
from All My Dreams?/
Or Are My Screams
your Dreamfilled Means?
Do you Make Cream
from All My Dreams?/or
Are My Screams
Your Dreamfilled Means?/...

12 August, 2012
Sydney, Australia

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Comment by Angel Finnegan on August 18, 2012 at 6:44

Goodness has nothing to be thanked for. Stephanie, although You being on the rag might, Irrational bitchy critiques to strangers that ostensibly wins you friends

How do you know something is absolute nonsense if you dont bother to read it all?  At least when I make comment on your poetry, (you do call it that, and yours, dont you?) I actually bother to read it.

You;re such a liar Stephanie. And such a mess. I know you actually read this poem from beginning to end.  I suppose you;re just trying to make up for being a bitterly poor artist and a jealous cunt. (Specifically of what, I have honestly know clue)

I really do take your remark as a compliment, seeing its projected misdirection for what it is, frustration and unhappiness with yourself and your own life which you will never get me to see the elevated virtues of by hating on me. 

AF

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