If I hear another

heartrendingly

saccharine tinged

lachrymose laden

and incredibly

uplifting song

sung by another

heartrendingly

saccharine tinged

lachrymose laden

and incredibly

uplifting singer . . .

 

I shall vomit . . . copiously !

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Comment by POETRY BY KDW on November 16, 2011 at 22:00

well done i love it.

Comment by POETRY BY KDW on November 18, 2011 at 10:23

David please, its actually against the site policy to give non constructive criticism. all poems are a creative outlet of expression that should be respected

Comment by william james falls on November 19, 2011 at 8:56

Dear David, some of us morons can spell BILGE WATER correctly,but thanks
anyway for another of your pearls of wisdom . . .bill.

Comment by Dermott Ryder on November 19, 2011 at 9:27

Good morning Bill

 

I see the destructive David Wakeling has attacked again. He appears to have embarked upon a policy of abusing everyone that brings something new to Poetry Sydney. I applaud your earlier measured response.

 

Members have alerted the moderator to Wakeling’s on-going campaign of sabotage but as yet neither action nor response is apparent.

 

Questions arise:

 

Why should any member invite a friend from the outside world to join us on Poetry Sydney to suffer the detritus raining Wakeling?

 

Why should any poet, established, emerging or braving this media for the first time, bring new work to Poetry Sydney to be the target of an inane and counter-productive wrecker?

 

To receive informed and constructive criticism presented with thoughtful and sensitive good will is a desire shared by many writers. Surely, to achieve such a productive focus must be one of the major reasons Adrian Wiggins created Poetry Sydney.

 

The raving of David Wakeling does not fall within these reasonable and socially acceptable parameters. So why is he being allowed to rave on unrestrained and to no foreseeable good? His actions attack the reputation and future viability of the site.

 

PS for David Wakeling: Davis, get a life, get help, use your real name and upload a recognizable photo so that we may see you for who and what you are.

 

Regards

 

 Dermott Ryder

 

cc Adrian Wiggins

Comment by Dermott Ryder on November 19, 2011 at 9:36

 

Oh dear! In my PS, a typo in David, I nope that it will not exacerbate his many problems or over excite his legion of demons...

Comment by Ken Setter on November 19, 2011 at 19:55

David. Your comments are getting a little childish.  It's time to pull your head in mate!

Comment by Jim Spain on November 20, 2011 at 10:42

"Ah me".

I'll just return to ABPA.

Jim.

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