SacredBeauty was never meant to be this beautiful Flowing through Greek temples this sacred oil That lights up a hundred lamps Through which the olive tree grows in soil In soil that gives life to…Continue
The windThe wind blew me awayIt blew blusterstaking my breathAs if to say I'll take youTake you to your deathThe wind blew me andthrew me, tussling and takingmy breathAs if to say I'll take youTake…Continue
Waiting for the yellow ChristWhence I came toThe Isle of TahitiHaving sailed acrossthis amnesiaSeeing Gauguin in the hazeAnd the natives of PolynesiaGreeting with smilesAs the tides drift slowly…Continue
Cold verseI am freezingLeft in cold verseIcycles surround asallow bodyTemperature lower..As you sit and reachfor my handBlue enters the roomAnd lips unspokenfreezeI who sitbeside youTurning blue unto…Continue
Hi Ilan! I just read some of your poetry in a discussion post and liked your style. I've just started writing poetry over the last year and would love some feedback/pointers. I've never studied literature etc so sometimes wonder if what I write is grammatically correct :)
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