This isn't poetry, it is rough and unread, and i hope beautiful and eventually read by you. I am certain of nothing else. - Sydney Poetry2024-03-28T15:01:38Zhttp://www.sydneypoetry.com/forum/topics/this-isnt-poetry-it-is-rough?commentId=5231298%3AComment%3A14311&x=1&feed=yes&xn_auth=noTechnology - our frenemy. Tho…tag:www.sydneypoetry.com,2011-06-03:5231298:Comment:143112011-06-03T06:52:22.487ZRachael Belle Myershttp://www.sydneypoetry.com/profile/RachaelBelleMyers
<p>Technology - our frenemy. Though perhaps more my friend than yours. :P But I feel your pain.</p>
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<p>Amazing piece. This is my favourite part: 'We live by rules of a plague,' he wrote. 'Fascinated with dying the moment we wake. Striving, ready to die at the end of the day. Why we rush for things to be done. Why we must painstakingly accomplish. If we did not, the reason, the incentive, the plausible fiction bred during our dreams of the previous night would be deemed meaningless. A…</p>
<p>Technology - our frenemy. Though perhaps more my friend than yours. :P But I feel your pain.</p>
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<p>Amazing piece. This is my favourite part: 'We live by rules of a plague,' he wrote. 'Fascinated with dying the moment we wake. Striving, ready to die at the end of the day. Why we rush for things to be done. Why we must painstakingly accomplish. If we did not, the reason, the incentive, the plausible fiction bred during our dreams of the previous night would be deemed meaningless. A concealing lie that hides only you.'</p>
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<p>You definitely know how to make a connection with the reader. Keep posting. I would love to see more.</p> Oh no. Nevermind what i said…tag:www.sydneypoetry.com,2011-05-31:5231298:Comment:137492011-05-31T16:17:51.526Zjon clarehttp://www.sydneypoetry.com/profile/jonclare
Oh no. Nevermind what i said in the brackets. the text has miraculously fixed itself in the posting process. I hate technology, and believe it knows that i do, and likes to cause me great stress.
Oh no. Nevermind what i said in the brackets. the text has miraculously fixed itself in the posting process. I hate technology, and believe it knows that i do, and likes to cause me great stress.