SPAM / found poem

 

 

 

you           look
                                    smashing
                           lovely
                   gorgeous,
all          of
those
adjectives
I’m especially
                      in love
              with
                         your
writing/

 

 

 

you
dress
             & wear
yr heart on
             yr sleeve/ your eyeball


(This poem is based on some spam posted as a comment to one of my blogs - I thought it two good to simply trash so I sliced and diced it a bit)

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It really gets across that disconcerting, halting babble of hastily-scripted infatuation; the equivalent of the old 'for a good time call...' toilet & train graffiti.

thanks - I'm not sure what it means either...I just liked the words in the spam linked posted to my blog. So I copied the words before I deleted it and sliced and diced then a bit.

Hey there, yeah it works....innovative and fresh. Good stuff

thanks

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