Spaces Between Leaves - Sydney Poetry2024-03-28T22:36:38Zhttp://www.sydneypoetry.com/forum/topics/spaces-between-leaves?xg_source=activity&feed=yes&xn_auth=noThank you, Kerryn. "...for t…tag:www.sydneypoetry.com,2012-08-18:5231298:Comment:414642012-08-18T00:45:03.162ZLee Wildehttp://www.sydneypoetry.com/profile/LeeWilde
<p>Thank you, Kerryn. <strong><em>"...for they startle the incompleteness in us.."</em></strong> Perfectly put.</p>
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<p>Thank you, Kerryn. <strong><em>"...for they startle the incompleteness in us.."</em></strong> Perfectly put.</p>
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<p></p> Sometimes the most beautiful…tag:www.sydneypoetry.com,2012-08-17:5231298:Comment:411812012-08-17T13:37:36.565ZKerryn Lee Bon.http://www.sydneypoetry.com/profile/KerrynLeeBon
Sometimes the most beautiful poems are incomplete, for they startle the incompleteness in us . . . and smash the falseness of the ego that adorns itself, ever more, not as the centre of the universe, but as the universe itself. Elegant poem Lee Wilde.
Sometimes the most beautiful poems are incomplete, for they startle the incompleteness in us . . . and smash the falseness of the ego that adorns itself, ever more, not as the centre of the universe, but as the universe itself. Elegant poem Lee Wilde. Thank you for taking the time…tag:www.sydneypoetry.com,2012-08-13:5231298:Comment:411582012-08-13T06:23:16.618ZLee Wildehttp://www.sydneypoetry.com/profile/LeeWilde
<p>Thank you for taking the time to comment, Stephanie. </p>
<p>It feels incomplete to me also. As with a love that could have been everything, but instead is left to blow away like so many grains of sand on a beach, the poem is all it was ever going to be and no more.</p>
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<p>Thank you for taking the time to comment, Stephanie. </p>
<p>It feels incomplete to me also. As with a love that could have been everything, but instead is left to blow away like so many grains of sand on a beach, the poem is all it was ever going to be and no more.</p>
<p> </p> This is okay but I am left wi…tag:www.sydneypoetry.com,2012-08-13:5231298:Comment:412572012-08-13T05:19:55.019ZStephanie Estherhttp://www.sydneypoetry.com/profile/StephanieEsther
<p>This is okay but I am left with the feeling that it is incomplete. I need a reason to care. I need to be introduced to these people. Otherwise I don't care. Give them names and personalities.</p>
<p>This is okay but I am left with the feeling that it is incomplete. I need a reason to care. I need to be introduced to these people. Otherwise I don't care. Give them names and personalities.</p>