For the richer poet and the poorer critic - a riposte - Sydney Poetry2024-03-29T06:24:05Zhttp://www.sydneypoetry.com/forum/topics/for-the-richer-poet-and-the-poorer-critic-a-riposte?commentId=5231298%3AComment%3A40435&feed=yes&xn_auth=noas well, the ambiguity or den…tag:www.sydneypoetry.com,2012-06-25:5231298:Comment:404472012-06-25T04:08:35.965ZAutoPiratehttp://www.sydneypoetry.com/profile/AutoPirate
as well, the ambiguity or denseness of "meaning" falls well within the parameters of Russian Formalism - the "ostranenie" of poetry, as well as the mead of poetry berserker rage, to evoke the Viking genre. Fair Poet, Stephanie, but as for reader...maybe lessons in linguistic and semiotics so as to plunge the unknowings as good St Erkenwald boded as our limits, dude.
as well, the ambiguity or denseness of "meaning" falls well within the parameters of Russian Formalism - the "ostranenie" of poetry, as well as the mead of poetry berserker rage, to evoke the Viking genre. Fair Poet, Stephanie, but as for reader...maybe lessons in linguistic and semiotics so as to plunge the unknowings as good St Erkenwald boded as our limits, dude. no need to care as well, no n…tag:www.sydneypoetry.com,2012-06-25:5231298:Comment:405512012-06-25T04:04:09.105ZAutoPiratehttp://www.sydneypoetry.com/profile/AutoPirate
no need to care as well, no need to negate either apropos Member Poetry guidelines, dude.
no need to care as well, no need to negate either apropos Member Poetry guidelines, dude. Thank you Stephanie, somethin…tag:www.sydneypoetry.com,2012-06-25:5231298:Comment:403472012-06-25T04:03:09.872ZAutoPiratehttp://www.sydneypoetry.com/profile/AutoPirate
Thank you Stephanie, something a little more reasoned but I do wonder what yardstick of poetry criticism you use?? hahaha<br />
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PS God Pty Ltd - Pity is limited but I wondered that there was scant or no reference to the business-making of corporate ministries in your poem, making the title somewhat of a misnomer :)
Thank you Stephanie, something a little more reasoned but I do wonder what yardstick of poetry criticism you use?? hahaha<br />
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PS God Pty Ltd - Pity is limited but I wondered that there was scant or no reference to the business-making of corporate ministries in your poem, making the title somewhat of a misnomer :) As a teacher I will give you…tag:www.sydneypoetry.com,2012-06-25:5231298:Comment:402592012-06-25T00:02:20.475ZStephanie Estherhttp://www.sydneypoetry.com/profile/StephanieEsther
<p>As a teacher I will give you 5 out of ten. My report card comments of this "rant" are: "Making good progress" although I'm damned if I know what it is progresses to. "Show's promise" although I dare not guess what promise it will keep. And finally: "Could try harder". Ultimately this is a failed attempt at being witty by using unrelated words. If there is no meaning then there is no point. It fails because either there is no meaning or the meaning is drowned in the metaphor. What exactly…</p>
<p>As a teacher I will give you 5 out of ten. My report card comments of this "rant" are: "Making good progress" although I'm damned if I know what it is progresses to. "Show's promise" although I dare not guess what promise it will keep. And finally: "Could try harder". Ultimately this is a failed attempt at being witty by using unrelated words. If there is no meaning then there is no point. It fails because either there is no meaning or the meaning is drowned in the metaphor. What exactly does "glamorous and drugged potlatch to the cult of the I the too-sharp axioms of the green hashish shoots young" mean and why should I care? My shame is that I inspired this drizzle.</p> I like the apostrophe in the…tag:www.sydneypoetry.com,2012-06-22:5231298:Comment:404352012-06-22T08:20:24.619ZAutoPiratehttp://www.sydneypoetry.com/profile/AutoPirate
I like the apostrophe in the first word of your poem "Lamb's" very much. quid pro quo fair poet.
I like the apostrophe in the first word of your poem "Lamb's" very much. quid pro quo fair poet. the rest is a personal invect…tag:www.sydneypoetry.com,2012-06-21:5231298:Comment:404262012-06-21T07:12:48.040ZAutoPiratehttp://www.sydneypoetry.com/profile/AutoPirate
the rest is a personal invective...thank you David...
the rest is a personal invective...thank you David... I like the first few words "T…tag:www.sydneypoetry.com,2012-06-20:5231298:Comment:403262012-06-20T23:26:57.132ZDavid G Landgrebehttp://www.sydneypoetry.com/profile/Davidlandgrebe
<p>I like the first few words "The good poet wrote a poem"</p>
<p>David. L</p>
<p>I like the first few words "The good poet wrote a poem"</p>
<p>David. L</p>