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Permalink Reply by Vee on September 23, 2010 at 1:43

Love love love this! Particularly the simplicity of 'Atlantis at last' - a skillful use of this image. 'At last' fits perfectly with the finality of this vignette, the freedom of swimming unrestricted being emphasised by the roomy punctuation. Nice one! Victoria

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Permalink Reply by Ilan on September 23, 2010 at 18:18

Thank you Victoria, I'm looking for another of yours on this site, can you suggest a poem please to read,
ilan

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Permalink Reply by Vee on September 23, 2010 at 20:17

Hey Ilan, I posted one last night named 'Elizabeth Bay' which is in the member poetry section. I've also got stuff on my blog at http://vi-t-a.blogspot.com/
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