Absurd, a poem - Sydney Poetry2024-03-29T09:35:48Zhttp://www.sydneypoetry.com/forum/topics/absurd-a-poem?commentId=5231298%3AComment%3A4131&x=1&feed=yes&xn_auth=noI'm glad you think so, and if…tag:www.sydneypoetry.com,2011-02-08:5231298:Comment:41312011-02-08T12:47:22.224Zjon clarehttp://www.sydneypoetry.com/profile/jonclare
I'm glad you think so, and if you can ascertain a conclusion of what it is, or what it's saying, let me know. I may happen to concur.
I'm glad you think so, and if you can ascertain a conclusion of what it is, or what it's saying, let me know. I may happen to concur. Very complex and thought prov…tag:www.sydneypoetry.com,2011-02-08:5231298:Comment:42362011-02-08T06:09:19.172ZSharonleehttp://www.sydneypoetry.com/profile/Sharonlee
Very complex and thought provoking...
Very complex and thought provoking... yeah, thanks, I find it hard…tag:www.sydneypoetry.com,2011-02-05:5231298:Comment:37512011-02-05T08:01:33.000Zjon clarehttp://www.sydneypoetry.com/profile/jonclare
<p>yeah, thanks, I find it hard to strictly adhere to rhyme. It becomes, for me, after a while really annoying when you're trapped by what the end of the next line has to be. But on the other hand it is also a perfect guideline; keeps you nice and structured. I have done a couple 'AABB' poems, and 'ABAB', but i still consider myself a beginner. So I try not to be pretentious.</p>
<p> Thanks for the feedback. </p>
<p>yeah, thanks, I find it hard to strictly adhere to rhyme. It becomes, for me, after a while really annoying when you're trapped by what the end of the next line has to be. But on the other hand it is also a perfect guideline; keeps you nice and structured. I have done a couple 'AABB' poems, and 'ABAB', but i still consider myself a beginner. So I try not to be pretentious.</p>
<p> Thanks for the feedback. </p> Although this poem doesn't rh…tag:www.sydneypoetry.com,2011-02-05:5231298:Comment:37462011-02-05T07:21:27.000ZSteve Goldsmithhttp://www.sydneypoetry.com/profile/Goldsmith
Although this poem doesn't rhyme, it does have good rhythm. Well done.
Although this poem doesn't rhyme, it does have good rhythm. Well done.